I'm well into my second time reading this story, and love it so much!
I am trying to get into twine and am very confused about it, and this is a work of art! Do you think you could share some tips or pointers on anything?
No. I'm sorry if it wasn't clear: the MC is almost 27 and the possible relationship with Harus started 3 years ago. If you're concerned in the aspect of grooming, this was not the case. The dynamics between Harus and the MC will be explored, but it's important to note that nothing occurred until the MC was of age and was initiated under the MC's volition.
This is so good! I got hooked into it so bad that i kinda didn't sleep all night. I may have perhaps restarted to much... I can't wait for more chapters to come out! ;_; it's really one of the best text based ones I've played.
came back for a reread and the writing feels even better 💗 i can't wait for part 2! one thing i'm curious about is having chosen to prefer physical prowess to magic initially, i'd like to balance them out so they're pretty similar; will there be any choices later in the game that we get locked out of if we don't focus on one skill, either magic or physical prowess? will increasing them equally lock us out of the higher difficulty choices for both?
I've played this IF dozens of times but I've always accepted Gabriel's help in Chotou. For the first time, I didn't, and HOLY FUCK THAT CHANGES EVERYTHING. I shall say no more bc spoilers but needless to say, I'm obsessed and I love this IF even more.
I played this game a while ago and came back to check on it and omg thank you so much for adding the OpenDyslexic font! I find it so hard to read some If's because they don't have the choice to change the fonts but thank you so much for this!!!<3
just finished the available content and this is bliss and torture at the same time. This game is just amazing and everything I was looking for, you did a dazzling work dang! the history is so well-built; the charachters are all very different and extremely well written + im drooling over that plot like WOW IT'S SO GOOD
bro I am so heartbroken there’s not more out this shit was absolutely amazing bro I got so invested in my character I cannot wait to play this in its entirety
Hello author! Very nicely written story! I'm looking forward to what you have in store for the future.
That being said, I have one question. The question itself isn't spoiler-y but any answer might involve spoilers. I don't mind spoilers myself but I just figured I'd mention it for anyone else reading my comment. It's related to the ROs though and IDK how else to ask. It's a bit important for my own reading experience.
QUESTION:
There are various supernatural races in this game, with different lifespans. Do I need to be concerned about any differences in longevity between the protagonist and their RO? I'd prefer to avoid a situation where my protagonist ends up inevitably dying of old age and the partner moves on to some other romance afterwards. Maybe the story doesn't even plan on addressing that - but thinking realistically, it seems like a pretty important thing to consider, between two people. And honestly, if I knew the RO was just going to move on like that, as they live for hundreds more years or whatever, it'd ruin the whole story for me. I'm still traumatized (okay, I'm being a little dramatic) from Spice and Wolf. Please give me the hard-hitting truth now before I go through hours and hours of wholesome romance only for it to end in (what I consider to be) tragedy.
I just greatly prefer romances where the characters stay together forever afterwards and there's no one else after that. So if lifespan considerations are relevant, it'll affect who I decide to romance.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Your question is valid, and I very much understand how you feel about this aspect. I'm going to try and hide a vague answer because I know this is important to some people. However, while vague, I feel it may be a sort of spoiler, so read at your own discretion.
While I cannot reveal specifics, I can assure you that I've taken into account the different lifespans and the implications they have for relationships in the story. I cannot say much else, but only please try not to worry about this element!
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I'm well into my second time reading this story, and love it so much!
I am trying to get into twine and am very confused about it, and this is a work of art!
Do you think you could share some tips or pointers on anything?
Love the writing
(can't wait for the next update)
is harus a child predator in one of the paths..??
No. I'm sorry if it wasn't clear: the MC is almost 27 and the possible relationship with Harus started 3 years ago. If you're concerned in the aspect of grooming, this was not the case. The dynamics between Harus and the MC will be explored, but it's important to note that nothing occurred until the MC was of age and was initiated under the MC's volition.
oh, that's a relief. thank you for the clarification 🙏❤️
This is so good! I got hooked into it so bad that i kinda didn't sleep all night. I may have perhaps restarted to much... I can't wait for more chapters to come out! ;_; it's really one of the best text based ones I've played.
this is one of the most beautiful stories I've read, amazing work authorrrr <3333
AHHHHH!!!!! i am in love with this. thank you so much author
AHH! I love thiiiss!!! I love the story and the characters! Gabriel my beloved... I can't wait for the next update!!
came back for a reread and the writing feels even better 💗 i can't wait for part 2! one thing i'm curious about is having chosen to prefer physical prowess to magic initially, i'd like to balance them out so they're pretty similar; will there be any choices later in the game that we get locked out of if we don't focus on one skill, either magic or physical prowess? will increasing them equally lock us out of the higher difficulty choices for both?
also... the slowburn with lee is killing me 😭❤️🩹
But, it will make it SO much better in the end
I've played this IF dozens of times but I've always accepted Gabriel's help in Chotou. For the first time, I didn't, and HOLY FUCK THAT CHANGES EVERYTHING. I shall say no more bc spoilers but needless to say, I'm obsessed and I love this IF even more.
Looks like....It's time for me to read this once again.
omg so good I can't wait for more and hope you can finally remove the blind fold D:
I played this game a while ago and came back to check on it and omg thank you so much for adding the OpenDyslexic font! I find it so hard to read some If's because they don't
have the choice to change the fonts but thank you so much for this!!!<3
Literally how do I get past the first page
Scroll down?
What the hell Allen
just finished the available content and this is bliss and torture at the same time. This game is just amazing and everything I was looking for, you did a dazzling work dang! the history is so well-built; the charachters are all very different and extremely well written + im drooling over that plot like WOW IT'S SO GOOD
anyways hum hum i love this game.
bro I am so heartbroken there’s not more out this shit was absolutely amazing bro I got so invested in my character I cannot wait to play this in its entirety
Hello author! Very nicely written story! I'm looking forward to what you have in store for the future.
That being said, I have one question. The question itself isn't spoiler-y but any answer might involve spoilers. I don't mind spoilers myself but I just figured I'd mention it for anyone else reading my comment. It's related to the ROs though and IDK how else to ask. It's a bit important for my own reading experience.
QUESTION:
There are various supernatural races in this game, with different lifespans. Do I need to be concerned about any differences in longevity between the protagonist and their RO? I'd prefer to avoid a situation where my protagonist ends up inevitably dying of old age and the partner moves on to some other romance afterwards. Maybe the story doesn't even plan on addressing that - but thinking realistically, it seems like a pretty important thing to consider, between two people. And honestly, if I knew the RO was just going to move on like that, as they live for hundreds more years or whatever, it'd ruin the whole story for me. I'm still traumatized (okay, I'm being a little dramatic) from Spice and Wolf. Please give me the hard-hitting truth now before I go through hours and hours of wholesome romance only for it to end in (what I consider to be) tragedy.
I just greatly prefer romances where the characters stay together forever afterwards and there's no one else after that. So if lifespan considerations are relevant, it'll affect who I decide to romance.
Thank you.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Your question is valid, and I very much understand how you feel about this aspect. I'm going to try and hide a vague answer because I know this is important to some people. However, while vague, I feel it may be a sort of spoiler, so read at your own discretion.
While I cannot reveal specifics, I can assure you that I've taken into account the different lifespans and the implications they have for relationships in the story. I cannot say much else, but only please try not to worry about this element!
Thanks for the response!!