I'm so mindblown at how well-written it is that I've gone through it all in one sitting. And the way you coded the appearance options it's just wow. Suffice to say I'm obsessed. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I adore the worldbuilding. I'm looking forward to more of it.
This is my new obsession!! I always loved interactive stories but most don't have a good story that just lock you in BUT THIS... I just couldn't stop, I nEeD mOrE
I love the game so far, really can't wait for the future updates!!! One thing that I really liked was peeking into the ROs thoughts after their encounters with MC!
sorry if you've answered a question similar to this before, but is it possible to romance multiple characters without them dating one another? the game is very enjoyable so far and i cannot wait to see more content!!
Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the game so far.
Regarding your question, it's something I've given thought to, but mostly in the context of poly routes. I've been contemplating both triangle and V poly dynamics, with an emphasis on romance rather than casual flings.
As for outside these poly-routes, I can give it some thought for certain characters. I think this sort of dynamic might be feasible, but my main concern is complexity at the moment.
Once I get the new systems ironed out, I can look at these things with a better understanding of what I can or can't do. Regardless, I appreciate the question, and feel free to share any ideas. I appreciate it!
Thank you for the reply!! I also think the word/term I was going for with my description is triad, nonetheless, thank you for taking the time to consider routes like that:) always sucks when you HAVE to romance one character in IFs lol /lh
I'm just really trying hard to get Lea.....I really like her, but I can't even talk to her, hardly. At the end so far, we are alone in a room and, just starring at each other listening to crickets chip.....how am I supposed to get anywhere with her if I can't even talk..... Just curious.
Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate your patience with Lea's story arc. I know that the slow burn can be frustrating at times, especially if handled improperly — to which I think I could have handled it a little better here.
I'm planning to redo most of Lea's end scenes in this part, and I'll work on incorporating more choices to enhance the interaction. I'm sorry it felt lacking, and I hope the future updates will make it feel less like "running into a wall." ^^;
I really love this game, it's one of my favourites along with Speaker and Wayfarer. I just had a bit of a question as I don't understand the guilt bar?
From your recent update I get that it's supposed to affect the character's relationship with the others but I personally feel like it would be understandable to hide something like that for personal safety so wouldn't the people who love you understand that as well?
Would a trust bar work better instead? So like the more your character trusts the other characters, the more you tell them and the more they can help you figure out what happened instead?
I'm not criticising at all I'm just unsure how it works in to the story?
Thank you for your feedback! To address your question: the guilt bar was initially designed to represent the MC's internal conflict over deception and the residual guilt from past actions. When I first implemented this mechanic, my grasp of game mechanics was pretty basic, and as you and others have pointed out, self-preservation might not necessarily warrant guilt.
In designing this, I believe I was primarily focused on the implications of lying rather than the act of self-preservation itself. I hope this clarifies my initial intent.
Based on the feedback I've received, I'll probably leave the guilt system it as it is for now. However, your suggestion of a trust system is particularly intriguing — it has sparked a "Why didn't I think of that?" moment for me, and I'd love to explore it further.
I greatly appreciate your comment and the inspiration you've given!
Was the story about the old horse and the unicorn a myth that already existed that you borrowed or did you write it yourself? That was genuinely one of the sweetest fables I've heard in a while. It's so simple and short, but it's so careful to pull at your heartstrings in the rawest way. All to have a happy ending about living for eternity that doesn't even bring up the thought that immortality could become torture.
I think it's the most wholesome story I've ever heard that involves a wish-granting genie-type character. It definitely elicited the strongest reaction I've had to a fable. And again, all that in such a short little story!
Thank you so much! I'm happy to hear this little story struck a chord with you. I created it myself, but I drew inspiration from traditional fables. I was trying to focus on life's joys rather than its potential burdens.
I have an avid dislike for all things text-based, but... This really did it for me. I love it! This gave me a different perspective [get it] on text-games.
I rarely do multiple playthroughs because I tend to figure out pretty early on what path I want to follow. This is the very first one I've EVER played that has caused me to do multiple playthroughs and I already can't wait for part 2!!!!!!!!! Also my do I enjoy Gabriel's jealousy lol.💗💗💗
Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that my game was able to provide that desire for more. I completely understand usually sticking to one path, so that means a lot. I hope you enjoy all that is to come! ♥
I adore your story and hope you're doing well! I have a question I didn't see anywhere though: My MC slept with Lyth and Leese was jealous afterward and said he doesn't share. Why is he in a Poly Route then? With that statement I'd feel he would be jealous no matter what, but he's okay when it's Gabriel? This just left me puzzled but hey I understand I'm also a jealous person Leese, lol. Thanks again!
Thank you for reaching out! I apologize for any confusion. In this storyline, the relationship between Leese/Lea and Gabriel is indeed designed to start with some initial jealousy. I aimed to explore a relationship that evolves from a sort of love triangle dynamic, growing into something deeper over time as they get to know each other better.
However, I acknowledge there's room for improvement to make this progression feel more natural and cohesive. I am currently redoing the poly routes and have already started on some scenes. I'm aiming to have these revisions included in the next update, or at the latest, the one following that. Thank you so much for your patience and understanding!
Nooo, you don't need to change it at all. I actually really liked the jealousy, it felt natural. I also love the idea of the love triangle! It feels like they both spend more time with the MC, so it makes sense that they are closer to them than to each other. Honestly, I was just curious, it might have sounded like I didn't like it, but I really do like it. It felt in character for Leese. He's my fave and while I adore Gabe (sorry babe), he'll always be my first choice. I loved everything about your writing, so I look forward to it but take all the time you need! :)
Oh, I'm sorry for any confusion again, lol! To clarify, I'm not planning to remove that element — I love it too! I’m just looking at ways to introduce these relationships more smoothly in the story. I want to expand on things a bit for each of them, and... I’m also considering setting it up to make Lee work for Ly in a potential 4th poly route in the future. My goal is to enhance, not rewrite them completely!
Personally, I adore all my characters, but I'm glad to know Lee is so loved! Your kind words truly mean a lot — thank you!
just wanted to drop in in light of ur progress update to say that while we love ur story and of course cant wait for more to be released ur health always comes first! dont let deadlines or pressure from any readers take priority over whats best for u; best of luck with ur healing & we'll be waiting for u whenever ur ready! take care of urself and thank u again for a wonderful story 💗
Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m doing much better now. While personal matters were indeed a factor, I can’t deny that those self-imposed deadlines also played a role. It took tremendous effort, but I’ve managed to shift my mindset about them. Your support means a lot to me and I promise I'm taking good care of myself. I can't wait to share all the things I've been working on! ♥
i've just finished playing through the available chapters, and i must say, i am invested. what resonates with me the most is mc's sh, as well as the relationship with sex if you choose it as your vice. it's... accurate, to say the least. and in a way, self indulgent to experience through the mc as someone who struggles with both. the representation is cathartic. i'm really looking forward to seeing how its handled further down the line; if we'll have the choice to either develop a healthier mindset, or to stick to what's familiar, even if it harms us and those around us. i definitely plan on having my mc get their shit together lol (possibly with the influence/assistance of certain ros...), but adding that nuance and the option to make that path of recovery a reluctant one is something id love to see. though, if that's too complicated to execute, i look forward to seeing how the mc evolves throughout the story regardless. love the game, love your writing, and most of all, love our emotional support raven (whom i have affectionately named poe <3)
Thank you so much for sharing! I'm honored you find the portrayals cathartic. I try to ensure such themes resonate on a deeper level. While I don't want to spoil anything, I hope the story unfolds in a way that makes the journey to recovery, or not, fulfilling.
Also, I absolutely love your raven's name! ♥
Thank you for playing and for your incredible support!
I read this a few months ago but wanted to drop in and say that I absolutely love this IF and am eagerly anticipating the next update. Hope you are doing well!
Hi, just created this account to express some love and support to you Alahria, but to also call out Jst-Ply2030, for that rude ass comment, clearly weren't thinking with their head when they sent it as all the blood wasn't flowing up their brain but down south. seriously thou i hate watching people complaining when they don't know the love you authors put in your work also considering coding is hard already, you don't owe them an answer, and i apologize to the wonderful author if my comment causes distress to see, if i'm causing a ruckus, nonetheless i just want to let you know your support and love doesn't come from rude people like them, but from those that love and appreciate you. as always your wellbeing is important, so take all the time you need. oh and all in all great story by the way, i'm loving it!
wtf my character still a virgin, no have sex. and romance character become non virgin, atleast make a virgin romance dude. side character make a clap but main character stroke their own penis/cunt. atleast make main character watch and become cuck.
I'm sorry for you frustrations, however a redo of the vice is ongoing with virginity being added and more pronounced in the story. Please understand that aggressive comments help no one. Please be patient, as I have a few scenes to add and redo along with a plethora of other things.
Don’t listen to them Alahria. They only speak for themselves. You can’t please everyone but you’ve pleased most people including me. Their one comment stands on its own. The rest of us don’t feel this way. Keep writing the great way you write.
I'm unsure, though it's something I've been contemplating. I'm open to the idea, and if it feels right for the story, I might explore adding more in future updates. However, I haven't made a final decision yet, so I'd say it's still up in the air.
Love this game, but there is one thing that can be improved in my opinion - background theme. Because I personally don't really like dark and light theme, because my eyes feeling bad when I reading with dark/light theme, so I think it would be better if there will be more themes, for example sometimes I read novels on ranobelib and there is a theme with #e5cf9d background color which is better for eyes. P.s. this game is so cool
I'm so glad you enjoyed the game, and I'm terribly sorry for the discomfort of the themes. Adding more themes is on my to do list, I'll look into adding this color!
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I'm so mindblown at how well-written it is that I've gone through it all in one sitting. And the way you coded the appearance options it's just wow. Suffice to say I'm obsessed. Thank you so much for sharing this with us. I adore the worldbuilding. I'm looking forward to more of it.
This is my new obsession!! I always loved interactive stories but most don't have a good story that just lock you in BUT THIS... I just couldn't stop, I nEeD mOrE
I love the game so far, really can't wait for the future updates!!! One thing that I really liked was peeking into the ROs thoughts after their encounters with MC!
sorry if you've answered a question similar to this before, but is it possible to romance multiple characters without them dating one another? the game is very enjoyable so far and i cannot wait to see more content!!
Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying the game so far.
Regarding your question, it's something I've given thought to, but mostly in the context of poly routes. I've been contemplating both triangle and V poly dynamics, with an emphasis on romance rather than casual flings.
As for outside these poly-routes, I can give it some thought for certain characters. I think this sort of dynamic might be feasible, but my main concern is complexity at the moment.
Once I get the new systems ironed out, I can look at these things with a better understanding of what I can or can't do. Regardless, I appreciate the question, and feel free to share any ideas. I appreciate it!
Thank you for the reply!! I also think the word/term I was going for with my description is triad, nonetheless, thank you for taking the time to consider routes like that:) always sucks when you HAVE to romance one character in IFs lol /lh
I'm just really trying hard to get Lea.....I really like her, but I can't even talk to her, hardly. At the end so far, we are alone in a room and, just starring at each other listening to crickets chip.....how am I supposed to get anywhere with her if I can't even talk..... Just curious.
Thank you for your feedback! I appreciate your patience with Lea's story arc. I know that the slow burn can be frustrating at times, especially if handled improperly — to which I think I could have handled it a little better here.
I'm planning to redo most of Lea's end scenes in this part, and I'll work on incorporating more choices to enhance the interaction. I'm sorry it felt lacking, and I hope the future updates will make it feel less like "running into a wall." ^^;
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I really love this game, it's one of my favourites along with Speaker and Wayfarer. I just had a bit of a question as I don't understand the guilt bar?
From your recent update I get that it's supposed to affect the character's relationship with the others but I personally feel like it would be understandable to hide something like that for personal safety so wouldn't the people who love you understand that as well?
Would a trust bar work better instead? So like the more your character trusts the other characters, the more you tell them and the more they can help you figure out what happened instead?
I'm not criticising at all I'm just unsure how it works in to the story?
Thank you for your feedback! To address your question: the guilt bar was initially designed to represent the MC's internal conflict over deception and the residual guilt from past actions. When I first implemented this mechanic, my grasp of game mechanics was pretty basic, and as you and others have pointed out, self-preservation might not necessarily warrant guilt.
In designing this, I believe I was primarily focused on the implications of lying rather than the act of self-preservation itself. I hope this clarifies my initial intent.
Based on the feedback I've received, I'll probably leave the guilt system it as it is for now. However, your suggestion of a trust system is particularly intriguing — it has sparked a "Why didn't I think of that?" moment for me, and I'd love to explore it further.
I greatly appreciate your comment and the inspiration you've given!
Okay, I have to ask.
Kinda spoilers ahead...
Was the story about the old horse and the unicorn a myth that already existed that you borrowed or did you write it yourself? That was genuinely one of the sweetest fables I've heard in a while. It's so simple and short, but it's so careful to pull at your heartstrings in the rawest way. All to have a happy ending about living for eternity that doesn't even bring up the thought that immortality could become torture.
I think it's the most wholesome story I've ever heard that involves a wish-granting genie-type character. It definitely elicited the strongest reaction I've had to a fable. And again, all that in such a short little story!
Thank you so much! I'm happy to hear this little story struck a chord with you. I created it myself, but I drew inspiration from traditional fables. I was trying to focus on life's joys rather than its potential burdens.
I have an avid dislike for all things text-based, but... This really did it for me. I love it! This gave me a different perspective [get it] on text-games.
I’m honored my story provided a new perspective for you! Thank you for giving it a chance and for your kind words. ♥
I rarely do multiple playthroughs because I tend to figure out pretty early on what path I want to follow. This is the very first one I've EVER played that has caused me to do multiple playthroughs and I already can't wait for part 2!!!!!!!!! Also my do I enjoy Gabriel's jealousy lol.💗💗💗
Thank you so much! I'm glad to hear that my game was able to provide that desire for more. I completely understand usually sticking to one path, so that means a lot. I hope you enjoy all that is to come! ♥
I adore your story and hope you're doing well! I have a question I didn't see anywhere though: My MC slept with Lyth and Leese was jealous afterward and said he doesn't share. Why is he in a Poly Route then? With that statement I'd feel he would be jealous no matter what, but he's okay when it's Gabriel? This just left me puzzled but hey I understand I'm also a jealous person Leese, lol. Thanks again!
Thank you for reaching out! I apologize for any confusion. In this storyline, the relationship between Leese/Lea and Gabriel is indeed designed to start with some initial jealousy. I aimed to explore a relationship that evolves from a sort of love triangle dynamic, growing into something deeper over time as they get to know each other better.
However, I acknowledge there's room for improvement to make this progression feel more natural and cohesive. I am currently redoing the poly routes and have already started on some scenes. I'm aiming to have these revisions included in the next update, or at the latest, the one following that. Thank you so much for your patience and understanding!
Nooo, you don't need to change it at all. I actually really liked the jealousy, it felt natural. I also love the idea of the love triangle! It feels like they both spend more time with the MC, so it makes sense that they are closer to them than to each other. Honestly, I was just curious, it might have sounded like I didn't like it, but I really do like it. It felt in character for Leese. He's my fave and while I adore Gabe (sorry babe), he'll always be my first choice. I loved everything about your writing, so I look forward to it but take all the time you need! :)
Oh, I'm sorry for any confusion again, lol! To clarify, I'm not planning to remove that element — I love it too! I’m just looking at ways to introduce these relationships more smoothly in the story. I want to expand on things a bit for each of them, and... I’m also considering setting it up to make Lee work for Ly in a potential 4th poly route in the future. My goal is to enhance, not rewrite them completely!
Personally, I adore all my characters, but I'm glad to know Lee is so loved! Your kind words truly mean a lot — thank you!
just wanted to drop in in light of ur progress update to say that while we love ur story and of course cant wait for more to be released ur health always comes first! dont let deadlines or pressure from any readers take priority over whats best for u; best of luck with ur healing & we'll be waiting for u whenever ur ready! take care of urself and thank u again for a wonderful story 💗
Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m doing much better now. While personal matters were indeed a factor, I can’t deny that those self-imposed deadlines also played a role. It took tremendous effort, but I’ve managed to shift my mindset about them. Your support means a lot to me and I promise I'm taking good care of myself. I can't wait to share all the things I've been working on! ♥
i've just finished playing through the available chapters, and i must say, i am invested. what resonates with me the most is mc's sh, as well as the relationship with sex if you choose it as your vice. it's... accurate, to say the least. and in a way, self indulgent to experience through the mc as someone who struggles with both. the representation is cathartic. i'm really looking forward to seeing how its handled further down the line; if we'll have the choice to either develop a healthier mindset, or to stick to what's familiar, even if it harms us and those around us. i definitely plan on having my mc get their shit together lol (possibly with the influence/assistance of certain ros...), but adding that nuance and the option to make that path of recovery a reluctant one is something id love to see. though, if that's too complicated to execute, i look forward to seeing how the mc evolves throughout the story regardless. love the game, love your writing, and most of all, love our emotional support raven (whom i have affectionately named poe <3)
Thank you so much for sharing! I'm honored you find the portrayals cathartic. I try to ensure such themes resonate on a deeper level. While I don't want to spoil anything, I hope the story unfolds in a way that makes the journey to recovery, or not, fulfilling.
Also, I absolutely love your raven's name! ♥
Thank you for playing and for your incredible support!
I read this a few months ago but wanted to drop in and say that I absolutely love this IF and am eagerly anticipating the next update. Hope you are doing well!
Just wanted to say that I loved both this and From Here to Again. Your characters and writing enthrall me. Thank you for writing them.
Hi, just created this account to express some love and support to you Alahria, but to also call out Jst-Ply2030, for that rude ass comment, clearly weren't thinking with their head when they sent it as all the blood wasn't flowing up their brain but down south. seriously thou i hate watching people complaining when they don't know the love you authors put in your work also considering coding is hard already, you don't owe them an answer, and i apologize to the wonderful author if my comment causes distress to see, if i'm causing a ruckus, nonetheless i just want to let you know your support and love doesn't come from rude people like them, but from those that love and appreciate you. as always your wellbeing is important, so take all the time you need. oh and all in all great story by the way, i'm loving it!
wtf my character still a virgin, no have sex. and romance character become non virgin, atleast make a virgin romance dude. side character make a clap but main character stroke their own penis/cunt. atleast make main character watch and become cuck.
I'm sorry for you frustrations, however a redo of the vice is ongoing with virginity being added and more pronounced in the story. Please understand that aggressive comments help no one. Please be patient, as I have a few scenes to add and redo along with a plethora of other things.
Don’t listen to them Alahria. They only speak for themselves. You can’t please everyone but you’ve pleased most people including me. Their one comment stands on its own. The rest of us don’t feel this way. Keep writing the great way you write.
Dude- this clearly looks to be some weird fetish you have. This is not a fetish game, so bugger off
I love this!!! I crave more!!!
Will there be more poly routes?
I'm unsure, though it's something I've been contemplating. I'm open to the idea, and if it feels right for the story, I might explore adding more in future updates. However, I haven't made a final decision yet, so I'd say it's still up in the air.
Love this game, but there is one thing that can be improved in my opinion - background theme. Because I personally don't really like dark and light theme, because my eyes feeling bad when I reading with dark/light theme, so I think it would be better if there will be more themes, for example sometimes I read novels on ranobelib and there is a theme with #e5cf9d background color which is better for eyes. P.s. this game is so cool
I'm so glad you enjoyed the game, and I'm terribly sorry for the discomfort of the themes. Adding more themes is on my to do list, I'll look into adding this color!