I adore your story and hope you're doing well! I have a question I didn't see anywhere though: My MC slept with Lyth and Leese was jealous afterward and said he doesn't share. Why is he in a Poly Route then? With that statement I'd feel he would be jealous no matter what, but he's okay when it's Gabriel? This just left me puzzled but hey I understand I'm also a jealous person Leese, lol. Thanks again!
Thank you for reaching out! I apologize for any confusion. In this storyline, the relationship between Leese/Lea and Gabriel is indeed designed to start with some initial jealousy. I aimed to explore a relationship that evolves from a sort of love triangle dynamic, growing into something deeper over time as they get to know each other better.
However, I acknowledge there's room for improvement to make this progression feel more natural and cohesive. I am currently redoing the poly routes and have already started on some scenes. I'm aiming to have these revisions included in the next update, or at the latest, the one following that. Thank you so much for your patience and understanding!
Nooo, you don't need to change it at all. I actually really liked the jealousy, it felt natural. I also love the idea of the love triangle! It feels like they both spend more time with the MC, so it makes sense that they are closer to them than to each other. Honestly, I was just curious, it might have sounded like I didn't like it, but I really do like it. It felt in character for Leese. He's my fave and while I adore Gabe (sorry babe), he'll always be my first choice. I loved everything about your writing, so I look forward to it but take all the time you need! :)
Oh, I'm sorry for any confusion again, lol! To clarify, I'm not planning to remove that element — I love it too! I’m just looking at ways to introduce these relationships more smoothly in the story. I want to expand on things a bit for each of them, and... I’m also considering setting it up to make Lee work for Ly in a potential 4th poly route in the future. My goal is to enhance, not rewrite them completely!
Personally, I adore all my characters, but I'm glad to know Lee is so loved! Your kind words truly mean a lot — thank you!
just wanted to drop in in light of ur progress update to say that while we love ur story and of course cant wait for more to be released ur health always comes first! dont let deadlines or pressure from any readers take priority over whats best for u; best of luck with ur healing & we'll be waiting for u whenever ur ready! take care of urself and thank u again for a wonderful story 💗
Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m doing much better now. While personal matters were indeed a factor, I can’t deny that those self-imposed deadlines also played a role. It took tremendous effort, but I’ve managed to shift my mindset about them. Your support means a lot to me and I promise I'm taking good care of myself. I can't wait to share all the things I've been working on! ♥
i've just finished playing through the available chapters, and i must say, i am invested. what resonates with me the most is mc's sh, as well as the relationship with sex if you choose it as your vice. it's... accurate, to say the least. and in a way, self indulgent to experience through the mc as someone who struggles with both. the representation is cathartic. i'm really looking forward to seeing how its handled further down the line; if we'll have the choice to either develop a healthier mindset, or to stick to what's familiar, even if it harms us and those around us. i definitely plan on having my mc get their shit together lol (possibly with the influence/assistance of certain ros...), but adding that nuance and the option to make that path of recovery a reluctant one is something id love to see. though, if that's too complicated to execute, i look forward to seeing how the mc evolves throughout the story regardless. love the game, love your writing, and most of all, love our emotional support raven (whom i have affectionately named poe <3)
Thank you so much for sharing! I'm honored you find the portrayals cathartic. I try to ensure such themes resonate on a deeper level. While I don't want to spoil anything, I hope the story unfolds in a way that makes the journey to recovery, or not, fulfilling.
Also, I absolutely love your raven's name! ♥
Thank you for playing and for your incredible support!
I read this a few months ago but wanted to drop in and say that I absolutely love this IF and am eagerly anticipating the next update. Hope you are doing well!
Hi, just created this account to express some love and support to you Alahria, but to also call out Jst-Ply2030, for that rude ass comment, clearly weren't thinking with their head when they sent it as all the blood wasn't flowing up their brain but down south. seriously thou i hate watching people complaining when they don't know the love you authors put in your work also considering coding is hard already, you don't owe them an answer, and i apologize to the wonderful author if my comment causes distress to see, if i'm causing a ruckus, nonetheless i just want to let you know your support and love doesn't come from rude people like them, but from those that love and appreciate you. as always your wellbeing is important, so take all the time you need. oh and all in all great story by the way, i'm loving it!
wtf my character still a virgin, no have sex. and romance character become non virgin, atleast make a virgin romance dude. side character make a clap but main character stroke their own penis/cunt. atleast make main character watch and become cuck.
I'm sorry for you frustrations, however a redo of the vice is ongoing with virginity being added and more pronounced in the story. Please understand that aggressive comments help no one. Please be patient, as I have a few scenes to add and redo along with a plethora of other things.
Don’t listen to them Alahria. They only speak for themselves. You can’t please everyone but you’ve pleased most people including me. Their one comment stands on its own. The rest of us don’t feel this way. Keep writing the great way you write.
I'm unsure, though it's something I've been contemplating. I'm open to the idea, and if it feels right for the story, I might explore adding more in future updates. However, I haven't made a final decision yet, so I'd say it's still up in the air.
Love this game, but there is one thing that can be improved in my opinion - background theme. Because I personally don't really like dark and light theme, because my eyes feeling bad when I reading with dark/light theme, so I think it would be better if there will be more themes, for example sometimes I read novels on ranobelib and there is a theme with #e5cf9d background color which is better for eyes. P.s. this game is so cool
I'm so glad you enjoyed the game, and I'm terribly sorry for the discomfort of the themes. Adding more themes is on my to do list, I'll look into adding this color!
Never before have I been pulled in so much by a storyline. This with the story and world building and characters. It's just...flawless. I love it. Might actually replace my favorite book series. Please keep up the good work. I love it and love reading it.
Side note: Leese/Lea is just amazing and I really really am hoping there's some kind of good way to tell them who the warden is.
How old are Harus? I need to know if I can call him daddy or not /hj
now seriously, I loved this piece of art, from the characters to the style of writing, all the plot and trauma is just *chef kiss*, thanks for all your hard work
(seriously, tho, Harus is much more old than MC?? I NEED TO KNOW : (((( )
I won't get tired of reading this story multiple times while waiting for the next update, the freedom it gives you is just amazing. It's been a long time since I felt so attracted to a novel, I'm looking forward for chapter 4 and more. (sorry for my english, i'm not a native english speaker)
I'm well into my second time reading this story, and love it so much!
I am trying to get into twine and am very confused about it, and this is a work of art! Do you think you could share some tips or pointers on anything?
I'm sorry for the late response. I generally Google whatever I'm trying to figure out, understanding comes slowly but I encourage you not to give up! I used these two most:
Idrelle Games (author of Wayfarer) has a few nice tutorials here.
Hi-Ev's guide has useful information as well, found here.
The Twine documentation might feel intimidating at first, but you'll understand it the more you learn. I wish you luck and the best!
I have actually read Wayfarer before, I didn’t even think to look for a tutorial, thanks for the heads up!
I really loved this story, and have read it 3 times already XD.
I just love the backstory and the level of detail to the story even without sight in incredible. I even feel the stress of needing to put the blindfold back on so we don’t get caught!
Like in the beginning, walking back to town with the constructs head on my bag, I kept yelling ‘put the blindfold on!’ thinking the thing watching us would find me out XD
No. I'm sorry if it wasn't clear: the MC is almost 27 and the possible relationship with Harus started 3 years ago. If you're concerned in the aspect of grooming, this was not the case. The dynamics between Harus and the MC will be explored, but it's important to note that nothing occurred until the MC was of age and was initiated under the MC's volition.
This is so good! I got hooked into it so bad that i kinda didn't sleep all night. I may have perhaps restarted to much... I can't wait for more chapters to come out! ;_; it's really one of the best text based ones I've played.
came back for a reread and the writing feels even better 💗 i can't wait for part 2! one thing i'm curious about is having chosen to prefer physical prowess to magic initially, i'd like to balance them out so they're pretty similar; will there be any choices later in the game that we get locked out of if we don't focus on one skill, either magic or physical prowess? will increasing them equally lock us out of the higher difficulty choices for both?
I've played this IF dozens of times but I've always accepted Gabriel's help in Chotou. For the first time, I didn't, and HOLY FUCK THAT CHANGES EVERYTHING. I shall say no more bc spoilers but needless to say, I'm obsessed and I love this IF even more.
I played this game a while ago and came back to check on it and omg thank you so much for adding the OpenDyslexic font! I find it so hard to read some If's because they don't have the choice to change the fonts but thank you so much for this!!!<3
just finished the available content and this is bliss and torture at the same time. This game is just amazing and everything I was looking for, you did a dazzling work dang! the history is so well-built; the charachters are all very different and extremely well written + im drooling over that plot like WOW IT'S SO GOOD
bro I am so heartbroken there’s not more out this shit was absolutely amazing bro I got so invested in my character I cannot wait to play this in its entirety
Hello author! Very nicely written story! I'm looking forward to what you have in store for the future.
That being said, I have one question. The question itself isn't spoiler-y but any answer might involve spoilers. I don't mind spoilers myself but I just figured I'd mention it for anyone else reading my comment. It's related to the ROs though and IDK how else to ask. It's a bit important for my own reading experience.
QUESTION:
There are various supernatural races in this game, with different lifespans. Do I need to be concerned about any differences in longevity between the protagonist and their RO? I'd prefer to avoid a situation where my protagonist ends up inevitably dying of old age and the partner moves on to some other romance afterwards. Maybe the story doesn't even plan on addressing that - but thinking realistically, it seems like a pretty important thing to consider, between two people. And honestly, if I knew the RO was just going to move on like that, as they live for hundreds more years or whatever, it'd ruin the whole story for me. I'm still traumatized (okay, I'm being a little dramatic) from Spice and Wolf. Please give me the hard-hitting truth now before I go through hours and hours of wholesome romance only for it to end in (what I consider to be) tragedy.
I just greatly prefer romances where the characters stay together forever afterwards and there's no one else after that. So if lifespan considerations are relevant, it'll affect who I decide to romance.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Your question is valid, and I very much understand how you feel about this aspect. I'm going to try and hide a vague answer because I know this is important to some people. However, while vague, I feel it may be a sort of spoiler, so read at your own discretion.
While I cannot reveal specifics, I can assure you that I've taken into account the different lifespans and the implications they have for relationships in the story. I cannot say much else, but only please try not to worry about this element!
There is an option to change font size on mobile. I believe the setting is at the bottom of the screen — tap the three lines and it should a show a list of tabs and the cog wheel for the settings. I hope that helps!
AUTHORRRRRR RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW HOW YOU WRITE SO BEAUTIFULLY AND HOW YOU WRITE WITH AN EMOTIONS ESPECIALLY THE POLY SCENES HUHUHUHUH. ANYWAYS, HERE ARE SOME AI ART OF THE MALES RO, HOPE YOU DONT MIND AND IM ALWAYS HERE LURKING IN THE SHADOWS WAITING FOR YOU UPDATE HAHAHAHAHA HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
Admos de Le Wren ─ Male. Alabaster skin with a grey hue that naturally darkens his lips. Golden Eyes, Large black horns that curve in and out. Silver hair that reaches his mid-back. Manicured nails sit upon fingers that darken at the tips. 6'4 feet height, and a wiry build. Overall soft but sharp features. Lyth de Le Wren - Male [Draconian]. Pale-ivory skin and cherry lips, the grey hue is absent from this draconian. Yellow eyes, 5'11 feet heights, and a lean build. Long, light blonde hair that grows past the shoulders, usually styled in various looks. Lyth has dark and well-polished horns that curve back and up like an S.Leese Van Laere ─ Male | Human | Vampire. Honey skin with dimpled cheeks. Hazel eyes, 6'0 feet heights, Well-built and broad shoulders build. Golden-brown curled hair, Leese lets it grow just past his stubbled jaw. A square face with a wide and chiseled jaw.Xiang Xiaowen - Male [Human]. Dewy, porcelain skin. Raven black hair that grows past their shoulders. Golden Brown eyes, 5'11 feet of height, with a willowy build. A well-sculpted oval face with monolid eyes.Gabriel Duarte ─ Male | Human. Rose beige skin. Strikingly red hair that almost grows to their shoulders, which they half tie back. Heterochromatic eyes, green on right and blue on left. 6'1 feet of height, and a brawny build. Gabriel has a well-kept and trimmed beard and a rectangular face.Alyosha Morozov - Male [Human] [???]. My Character
So first (and this isn't directed at you), I'm not going to dive into the subject of AI art because when I shared my results a couple months ago, it sparked some drama, I suppose. Regardless, I understand the controversies surrounding it better now.
With that out of the way, I'm going to assume this is ChatGPT because the images of Lyth and Admos are near identical to the results I got lmao.
When I tried generating Admos and Lyth, it took me quite a few tries to get the AI to make them right. If you tell it they're basically elves with horns you should get results similar to how I pictured them. Before that, I kept getting images that seemed like a mashup of Avatar aliens and dragons with fancy mustaches.
I have some poorly drawn Admos images from a couple years ago ─ I might share them but his design changed some since then. I have ones of Lyth and Xiaowen as well but they are older and terrible (I'll be honest, I'm insecure with my art).
However, thinking of these drawings makes me remember the original version of the story ─ ohhh the nostalgia. It makes me want to go back and revisit my old ideas and see if I can make them into a new story.
Thank you for sharing, and I'm so glad you enjoy WYE!
AUTHORRRRR AHHHHHH, I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY. AND ALSO THIS IS AI IMAGE BY BING, THEY CREATE BETTER ARTS THAN CHATGPT. ANYWAYS, I DONT UNDERSTAND ON WHY SOME PEOPLE HATE YOU USING AI, BUT STILL I WILL CONTINUE SUPPORTING YOUR STORYYYYYY HEHEHEHEHHE
Hey, I saw your name and just wanted to say I hope you're okay. I don't know what you are going through, but maybe professional help is the answer, or talking to a trusted friend about what you are going through. People care about you, even if it may not feel like it at times. Wish you the best.
I'm not gonna beat around the bush, this is one of the best IF's I've ever played. From setting to characters and writing everything sits right with me. In short, I love it!
I read a lot of stories in here, and I must say, this is one of the best. The worldbuilding is really good so far, you can see the amount of love and dedication to the proyect. All the characters so far are really charming on their own way (like, wasn't expecting Gabriel to be such a flirt and I absolutely love it). I really like the interactions, and I loved that se can read their thoughs after talking to the warden in situations like in the camp, and I love even more the interactions that the poly routes have (only played the Gabriel and van Leare, but assume the other ones will have similar moments like the one those two have at camp). Love the Warden as an MC, and if something happends to the raven I will riot. And way the plot is being set up is amazing, and really makes me want to read more. Take your time, you are doing amazing, but also can't wait for more.
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I adore your story and hope you're doing well! I have a question I didn't see anywhere though: My MC slept with Lyth and Leese was jealous afterward and said he doesn't share. Why is he in a Poly Route then? With that statement I'd feel he would be jealous no matter what, but he's okay when it's Gabriel? This just left me puzzled but hey I understand I'm also a jealous person Leese, lol. Thanks again!
Thank you for reaching out! I apologize for any confusion. In this storyline, the relationship between Leese/Lea and Gabriel is indeed designed to start with some initial jealousy. I aimed to explore a relationship that evolves from a sort of love triangle dynamic, growing into something deeper over time as they get to know each other better.
However, I acknowledge there's room for improvement to make this progression feel more natural and cohesive. I am currently redoing the poly routes and have already started on some scenes. I'm aiming to have these revisions included in the next update, or at the latest, the one following that. Thank you so much for your patience and understanding!
Nooo, you don't need to change it at all. I actually really liked the jealousy, it felt natural. I also love the idea of the love triangle! It feels like they both spend more time with the MC, so it makes sense that they are closer to them than to each other. Honestly, I was just curious, it might have sounded like I didn't like it, but I really do like it. It felt in character for Leese. He's my fave and while I adore Gabe (sorry babe), he'll always be my first choice. I loved everything about your writing, so I look forward to it but take all the time you need! :)
Oh, I'm sorry for any confusion again, lol! To clarify, I'm not planning to remove that element — I love it too! I’m just looking at ways to introduce these relationships more smoothly in the story. I want to expand on things a bit for each of them, and... I’m also considering setting it up to make Lee work for Ly in a potential 4th poly route in the future. My goal is to enhance, not rewrite them completely!
Personally, I adore all my characters, but I'm glad to know Lee is so loved! Your kind words truly mean a lot — thank you!
just wanted to drop in in light of ur progress update to say that while we love ur story and of course cant wait for more to be released ur health always comes first! dont let deadlines or pressure from any readers take priority over whats best for u; best of luck with ur healing & we'll be waiting for u whenever ur ready! take care of urself and thank u again for a wonderful story 💗
Thank you so much for your kind words! I’m doing much better now. While personal matters were indeed a factor, I can’t deny that those self-imposed deadlines also played a role. It took tremendous effort, but I’ve managed to shift my mindset about them. Your support means a lot to me and I promise I'm taking good care of myself. I can't wait to share all the things I've been working on! ♥
i've just finished playing through the available chapters, and i must say, i am invested. what resonates with me the most is mc's sh, as well as the relationship with sex if you choose it as your vice. it's... accurate, to say the least. and in a way, self indulgent to experience through the mc as someone who struggles with both. the representation is cathartic. i'm really looking forward to seeing how its handled further down the line; if we'll have the choice to either develop a healthier mindset, or to stick to what's familiar, even if it harms us and those around us. i definitely plan on having my mc get their shit together lol (possibly with the influence/assistance of certain ros...), but adding that nuance and the option to make that path of recovery a reluctant one is something id love to see. though, if that's too complicated to execute, i look forward to seeing how the mc evolves throughout the story regardless. love the game, love your writing, and most of all, love our emotional support raven (whom i have affectionately named poe <3)
Thank you so much for sharing! I'm honored you find the portrayals cathartic. I try to ensure such themes resonate on a deeper level. While I don't want to spoil anything, I hope the story unfolds in a way that makes the journey to recovery, or not, fulfilling.
Also, I absolutely love your raven's name! ♥
Thank you for playing and for your incredible support!
I read this a few months ago but wanted to drop in and say that I absolutely love this IF and am eagerly anticipating the next update. Hope you are doing well!
Just wanted to say that I loved both this and From Here to Again. Your characters and writing enthrall me. Thank you for writing them.
Hi, just created this account to express some love and support to you Alahria, but to also call out Jst-Ply2030, for that rude ass comment, clearly weren't thinking with their head when they sent it as all the blood wasn't flowing up their brain but down south. seriously thou i hate watching people complaining when they don't know the love you authors put in your work also considering coding is hard already, you don't owe them an answer, and i apologize to the wonderful author if my comment causes distress to see, if i'm causing a ruckus, nonetheless i just want to let you know your support and love doesn't come from rude people like them, but from those that love and appreciate you. as always your wellbeing is important, so take all the time you need. oh and all in all great story by the way, i'm loving it!
wtf my character still a virgin, no have sex. and romance character become non virgin, atleast make a virgin romance dude. side character make a clap but main character stroke their own penis/cunt. atleast make main character watch and become cuck.
I'm sorry for you frustrations, however a redo of the vice is ongoing with virginity being added and more pronounced in the story. Please understand that aggressive comments help no one. Please be patient, as I have a few scenes to add and redo along with a plethora of other things.
Don’t listen to them Alahria. They only speak for themselves. You can’t please everyone but you’ve pleased most people including me. Their one comment stands on its own. The rest of us don’t feel this way. Keep writing the great way you write.
Dude- this clearly looks to be some weird fetish you have. This is not a fetish game, so bugger off
I love this!!! I crave more!!!
Will there be more poly routes?
I'm unsure, though it's something I've been contemplating. I'm open to the idea, and if it feels right for the story, I might explore adding more in future updates. However, I haven't made a final decision yet, so I'd say it's still up in the air.
Love this game, but there is one thing that can be improved in my opinion - background theme. Because I personally don't really like dark and light theme, because my eyes feeling bad when I reading with dark/light theme, so I think it would be better if there will be more themes, for example sometimes I read novels on ranobelib and there is a theme with #e5cf9d background color which is better for eyes. P.s. this game is so cool
I'm so glad you enjoyed the game, and I'm terribly sorry for the discomfort of the themes. Adding more themes is on my to do list, I'll look into adding this color!
absolutely stunning. i eagerly await to see more adventures of our warden.
I love this so much! Can't wait for an update. Your writing is wonderful with a lot of detail which I love!
Never before have I been pulled in so much by a storyline. This with the story and world building and characters. It's just...flawless. I love it. Might actually replace my favorite book series. Please keep up the good work. I love it and love reading it.
Side note: Leese/Lea is just amazing and I really really am hoping there's some kind of good way to tell them who the warden is.
How old are Harus? I need to know if I can call him daddy or not /hj
now seriously, I loved this piece of art, from the characters to the style of writing, all the plot and trauma is just *chef kiss*, thanks for all your hard work
(seriously, tho, Harus is much more old than MC?? I NEED TO KNOW : (((( )
Thank you! I answered this question on Tumblr, just be warned of its potential spoiler.
I won't get tired of reading this story multiple times while waiting for the next update, the freedom it gives you is just amazing. It's been a long time since I felt so attracted to a novel, I'm looking forward for chapter 4 and more. (sorry for my english, i'm not a native english speaker)
I'm well into my second time reading this story, and love it so much!
I am trying to get into twine and am very confused about it, and this is a work of art!
Do you think you could share some tips or pointers on anything?
I'm sorry for the late response. I generally Google whatever I'm trying to figure out, understanding comes slowly but I encourage you not to give up! I used these two most:
Idrelle Games (author of Wayfarer) has a few nice tutorials here.
Hi-Ev's guide has useful information as well, found here.
The Twine documentation might feel intimidating at first, but you'll understand it the more you learn. I wish you luck and the best!
Thank you!
I have actually read Wayfarer before, I didn’t even think to look for a tutorial, thanks for the heads up!
I really loved this story, and have read it 3 times already XD.
I just love the backstory and the level of detail to the story even without sight in incredible. I even feel the stress of needing to put the blindfold back on so we don’t get caught! Like in the beginning, walking back to town with the constructs head on my bag, I kept yelling ‘put the blindfold on!’ thinking the thing watching us would find me out XD
Can’t wait for the next update!
Love the writing
(can't wait for the next update)
is harus a child predator in one of the paths..??
No. I'm sorry if it wasn't clear: the MC is almost 27 and the possible relationship with Harus started 3 years ago. If you're concerned in the aspect of grooming, this was not the case. The dynamics between Harus and the MC will be explored, but it's important to note that nothing occurred until the MC was of age and was initiated under the MC's volition.
oh, that's a relief. thank you for the clarification 🙏❤️
This is so good! I got hooked into it so bad that i kinda didn't sleep all night. I may have perhaps restarted to much... I can't wait for more chapters to come out! ;_; it's really one of the best text based ones I've played.
this is one of the most beautiful stories I've read, amazing work authorrrr <3333
AHHHHH!!!!! i am in love with this. thank you so much author
AHH! I love thiiiss!!! I love the story and the characters! Gabriel my beloved... I can't wait for the next update!!
came back for a reread and the writing feels even better 💗 i can't wait for part 2! one thing i'm curious about is having chosen to prefer physical prowess to magic initially, i'd like to balance them out so they're pretty similar; will there be any choices later in the game that we get locked out of if we don't focus on one skill, either magic or physical prowess? will increasing them equally lock us out of the higher difficulty choices for both?
also... the slowburn with lee is killing me 😭❤️🩹
But, it will make it SO much better in the end
I've played this IF dozens of times but I've always accepted Gabriel's help in Chotou. For the first time, I didn't, and HOLY FUCK THAT CHANGES EVERYTHING. I shall say no more bc spoilers but needless to say, I'm obsessed and I love this IF even more.
Looks like....It's time for me to read this once again.
omg so good I can't wait for more and hope you can finally remove the blind fold D:
I played this game a while ago and came back to check on it and omg thank you so much for adding the OpenDyslexic font! I find it so hard to read some If's because they don't
have the choice to change the fonts but thank you so much for this!!!<3
Literally how do I get past the first page
Scroll down?
What the hell Allen
just finished the available content and this is bliss and torture at the same time. This game is just amazing and everything I was looking for, you did a dazzling work dang! the history is so well-built; the charachters are all very different and extremely well written + im drooling over that plot like WOW IT'S SO GOOD
anyways hum hum i love this game.
bro I am so heartbroken there’s not more out this shit was absolutely amazing bro I got so invested in my character I cannot wait to play this in its entirety
Hello author! Very nicely written story! I'm looking forward to what you have in store for the future.
That being said, I have one question. The question itself isn't spoiler-y but any answer might involve spoilers. I don't mind spoilers myself but I just figured I'd mention it for anyone else reading my comment. It's related to the ROs though and IDK how else to ask. It's a bit important for my own reading experience.
QUESTION:
There are various supernatural races in this game, with different lifespans. Do I need to be concerned about any differences in longevity between the protagonist and their RO? I'd prefer to avoid a situation where my protagonist ends up inevitably dying of old age and the partner moves on to some other romance afterwards. Maybe the story doesn't even plan on addressing that - but thinking realistically, it seems like a pretty important thing to consider, between two people. And honestly, if I knew the RO was just going to move on like that, as they live for hundreds more years or whatever, it'd ruin the whole story for me. I'm still traumatized (okay, I'm being a little dramatic) from Spice and Wolf. Please give me the hard-hitting truth now before I go through hours and hours of wholesome romance only for it to end in (what I consider to be) tragedy.
I just greatly prefer romances where the characters stay together forever afterwards and there's no one else after that. So if lifespan considerations are relevant, it'll affect who I decide to romance.
Thank you.
I'm glad you're enjoying the story! Your question is valid, and I very much understand how you feel about this aspect. I'm going to try and hide a vague answer because I know this is important to some people. However, while vague, I feel it may be a sort of spoiler, so read at your own discretion.
While I cannot reveal specifics, I can assure you that I've taken into account the different lifespans and the implications they have for relationships in the story. I cannot say much else, but only please try not to worry about this element!
Thanks for the response!!
I LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH, i'm really excited to see the next part!!!! also leese has my heart <33
just started the game. it was seeming a little dark and serious so to keep things light i named the bird Fuckbeak
I'm done lol
How can this be so good!!!? I came into the game, trying to woo Admos. But Lyth has throughly woo me instead!!! 😔❤️
Wanted to read but cannot couldn't change font's size on my phone, otherwise the text on mobile is very very small. A shame, was interested.
There is an option to change font size on mobile. I believe the setting is at the bottom of the screen — tap the three lines and it should a show a list of tabs and the cog wheel for the settings. I hope that helps!
AUTHORRRRRR RAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH, I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW HOW YOU WRITE SO BEAUTIFULLY AND HOW YOU WRITE WITH AN EMOTIONS ESPECIALLY THE POLY SCENES HUHUHUHUH. ANYWAYS, HERE ARE SOME AI ART OF THE MALES RO, HOPE YOU DONT MIND AND IM ALWAYS HERE LURKING IN THE SHADOWS WAITING FOR YOU UPDATE HAHAHAHAHA HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
I love theseee, QUESTION THOUGH did you use an app for this?? I can't find any good ai makers
Bing ai image creator, put in description and it will give you a lot of results 😁
Aaaaaaaa tysmm!!!!🙏🏼😊
So first (and this isn't directed at you), I'm not going to dive into the subject of AI art because when I shared my results a couple months ago, it sparked some drama, I suppose. Regardless, I understand the controversies surrounding it better now.
With that out of the way, I'm going to assume this is ChatGPT because the images of Lyth and Admos are near identical to the results I got lmao.
When I tried generating Admos and Lyth, it took me quite a few tries to get the AI to make them right. If you tell it they're basically elves with horns you should get results similar to how I pictured them. Before that, I kept getting images that seemed like a mashup of Avatar aliens and dragons with fancy mustaches.
I have some poorly drawn Admos images from a couple years ago ─ I might share them but his design changed some since then. I have ones of Lyth and Xiaowen as well but they are older and terrible (I'll be honest, I'm insecure with my art).
However, thinking of these drawings makes me remember the original version of the story ─ ohhh the nostalgia. It makes me want to go back and revisit my old ideas and see if I can make them into a new story.
Thank you for sharing, and I'm so glad you enjoy WYE!
AUTHORRRRR AHHHHHH, I REALLY LIKE YOUR STORY. AND ALSO THIS IS AI IMAGE BY BING, THEY CREATE BETTER ARTS THAN CHATGPT. ANYWAYS, I DONT UNDERSTAND ON WHY SOME PEOPLE HATE YOU USING AI, BUT STILL I WILL CONTINUE SUPPORTING YOUR STORYYYYYY HEHEHEHEHHE
Hey, I saw your name and just wanted to say I hope you're okay. I don't know what you are going through, but maybe professional help is the answer, or talking to a trusted friend about what you are going through. People care about you, even if it may not feel like it at times. Wish you the best.
I LOVE THIS, *chefs kiss* also definitely not me flirting with EVERY RO in the game at every opportunity 😭
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I'm not gonna beat around the bush, this is one of the best IF's I've ever played.
From setting to characters and writing everything sits right with me. In short, I love it!
I read a lot of stories in here, and I must say, this is one of the best. The worldbuilding is really good so far, you can see the amount of love and dedication to the proyect. All the characters so far are really charming on their own way (like, wasn't expecting Gabriel to be such a flirt and I absolutely love it). I really like the interactions, and I loved that se can read their thoughs after talking to the warden in situations like in the camp, and I love even more the interactions that the poly routes have (only played the Gabriel and van Leare, but assume the other ones will have similar moments like the one those two have at camp). Love the Warden as an MC, and if something happends to the raven I will riot. And way the plot is being set up is amazing, and really makes me want to read more. Take your time, you are doing amazing, but also can't wait for more.
Question; how old is the warden? I know that they are around 26, but are they still 25 or turning 27?
Also, is nautical lost set in the same universe as this? (Asking because the rapier says it's from Valia)
They are almost 27 and yes, Nautical Lost is set in the same world. Sorry for the late reply!