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I was gettin' excited for more page 'til my excitement last long when I made it to the final demo 😒. Looking forward in the future 🀞!! I love the settings and such.

Aaaaa this is so good!!! I absolutely adore your style so far, it reads smoothly and pleasantly without feeling like it goes by too fast. Can't wait to see more <3

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Bestie, I’m in love with this game

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I just played Within Your Eyes and when I went to check your other work, I found this! It certainly holds a good promise and I like your writings so far. I'm looking forward to future updates πŸ‘πŸ»

I can't play on mobile 😭

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oh my god! what a rare find! a steampunk genre! i'm loving it so far, too bad it's a secondary project. I was gonna be a bit sad about the slow updates until i discovered that i'm actually also playing your main project lol🀣

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Is this still being worked on? 😭 I love it so much πŸ˜­πŸ’•

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It definitely is! I apologize for the delay — some personal issues temporarily halted all my projects a few months ago. Currently, I'm heavily focused on revising Within Your Eyes. However, I have completed the detailed timeline for Chapter 2 for this story, and once I release this big update for WYE, I'll start the drafting phase. Thank you so much for your patience and support!

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Love it, need moarr 😍

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This is so good please continue it. Also it works really well with movie soundtracks as background music.

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MOREEEE WE NEED MOREEEE

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Keep up the good work!! Man poor Simon didn't deserve that, I cried for him, I went NOOO SIMON😭

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I really enjoyed this! It hits all the right buttons for me - the writing, the tone, the era, the characterisation.

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I love this!!!! This is exactly the type of story I enjoyβ™₯β™₯ I cant wait for future updates :D 

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i need more

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this is soo up my alley it's insane. really really enjoyed this style of writing and the overall tone that has been established thus far. can't wait to see where it goes!

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THIS IS SUCH A GORGEOUS BEGINNING ✨ 😭 why are you so amazing πŸ’“?!!

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This was an awesome start!  Can't wait for more 😊

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The way this reads as my exact cup of tea is almost uncanny. I love, love the many times and places when/where the rush of invention had us all flying untold heights, only to dare us to open our eyes... And behold all the new wonders and horrors awaiting us, beyond the horizon of the present times. It's a line of thought that has always both fascinated and humbled me. I'll be cheering for the success of this project, and I look forward to reading more.

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Thank you! It's something that has also fascinated me, especially theories like the Great Filter.

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Alahria has made another IF – thank god I've got therapy tomorrow lessgoooo

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Dude.. i havent read it yet. But.. how awesome are you?!! As if within your eyes isn't enough of a treat to read. Omg I already know I'm gonna love this because i know the writer is great. 


Edit: okay so I read it and I was right. Bruh..that opening scene.. was.. vivid.. πŸ‘€πŸ˜…

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As always, you never disappoint. Also.. the template works fine on mobile, at least for me. it just has to be landscape rather than portrait mode. 

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seconded :D

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Thank you! The template page said it wasn't meant for it and I forgot to check on mobile ^^;